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March 26, 2008
David: Tina
Tina hair is long and brown
Tina eyes are blue
Tina strong and have fast hands
Tina me love youTina smile when she see me
Tina not afraid
Tina bring me food and wine
Tina not get paidTina only girl in town
For thing like me to love
Tina kind and pretty too
Fit my heart like gloveGo see Tina other night
Tina scream in pain
Me pull man off of Tina quick
Not hurt her againTina cry and say mean things
Tina run away
Me follow her into the woods
Me and Tina together always
Okay, the scansion doesn't quite work in a couple spots. He's some sort of subhuman thing. You expect him to keep the meter?
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Comments
That's just creepy. So, well done.
Posted by: Sealyon at March 26, 2008 4:27 PM · Permalink