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February 12, 2008

Jeff R.: Poly

John loved Sue, but Sue dug Pete,
While Pete obsessed on Claire:
Triangles weren't near enough;
They fashioned a love square.

With rampant sublimated lust
And longing in their scene,
They concentrated on their jobs,
Building a time machine.

Into the future they voyaged
And found that things had changed:
Now Sue liked John, but he'd moved on
The order re-arranged.

Some with their past, or future selves
Or friends became delighted.
Still never was a couple formed
Where both sides were requited.

With all this temporalic strain,
The timeline became cracked,
And alternate dimensions formed
The first love tessaract.

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Comments

Brilliant!

Posted by: Jim Parkinson at February 12, 2008 4:01 PM · Permalink

A-HAHAHAHA!!!!!

*falls out of chair laughing*

Well done!

Posted by: LJ at February 12, 2008 5:42 PM · Permalink